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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Mending Heart

    Hi. KL here, at your service. First off... "Mending Heart". Ah, yes. Completely relevant to the poem. Although I expected more fluid content, and therefore I was greatly disappointed to ...

    Jan 8, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Snowflake Garden

    Hi there, Keit. (your name is long; so I made you a nickname. :D) I'm KL, at your service~ First off... "Snowflake Garden". The title, I think, shows little relevance ...

    Jan 8, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Little Death

    Hi Sugar, KL here, at your service~ First off... "Little Death"? Good, eye-catching title. Now... Remind me of something That is worth reminiscing Something worthwhile, Something interesting; About so

    Jan 8, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Leaving Behind a Grave

    Oh my... *gold star* I can relate. I want to be constructive, but I just can't bring myself to be nitpicky over this touching piece. A similar experience has come ...

    Aug 10, 2009
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Funky Rhyme Scheme?

    You tricked me! *gasps* But nah, I'm gonna cut you some slack. This is the first poem that made me smile today. Just lovely. I'd give you a gold star... ...

    Aug 5, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Ami .

    Hi there! KL here... I shall be your critic for today. I'mma gunna dissect your poem now. :] First off... Amanda Hey, I thought the poem's title was 'Ami'? If ...

    Aug 5, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Does anyone know

    Mmkay. Hi, Flower! KL here. I'll review you for today. First off... Does anyone know the feelings I hide? Does anyone see the tears I cry? Can anyone feel this ...

    Aug 5, 2009
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: locked up

    RAP - Retards Attempting Poetry. I believe that, and I still strongly believe that, and rap cannot be considered as poetry. Rap is part of the pop culture, but no... ...

    Aug 5, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Cheerleading

    fluteluvr77 - This is for the worst type of literature contest, so its alright if we don't nitpick too much, lol. XD You're adorable, Night! This is so cute! (>3

    Jul 25, 2009
  • Other » General, General Re: How are YOU doing in school

    We don't get letters, too; we get the exact averages. I usually get 87-90 (out of 100) every quarter. When my luck is bad, or if I'm feeling lazy, sadistic ...

    Jul 22, 2009
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: Missing

    AKL Super-Ultra-Mega-Giga Awesome Messaging Presents... "KL's REVIEW" ~~~ Hi there, Ali! KL here! I'll be your critic for today! Warning: I can be brutally honest. Strong opinions, passionate viewpoin

    Jul 22, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: About something

    AKL Super-Ultra-Mega-Giga Awesome Messaging Presents... "KL's REVIEW" ~~~ Hi, Demi! KL here! I'll be your critic for today! :D First off... If you want to tell me about something beautiful, ...

    Jul 22, 2009


Life, although it may only be an accumulation of anguish, is dear to me, and I will defend it.
— Mary Shelley, Frankenstein